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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Glycerol Sound, Jul 2, 2010.

  1. Glycerol Sound

    Glycerol Sound TPF Noob!

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    Took a picture of this tree on a walk to speedway for a slushie. Would like some feedback cause I'm not even sure if I like it myself
    PP was just the sepia conversion and some tiny contrast boost
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  2. R.D.

    R.D. TPF Noob!

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    what's with the branch off the right top.. just doesn't move me at all.. nothing too it.. maybe if you captured a bird flying off it or something.
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think, if you had really really made that one tree the subject of this photo, it would have some more appeal. Some steps to the left, pushing the crown of the tree more to the right of your frame (thus also eliminating the intruding branch from above) AND including the sideways branch of "your" tree ... that would have given your photo a a non-centred subject, direction, and probably some more appeal.
     
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    dak1b TPF Noob!

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    the other tree leaning in the photo is distracting...
     
  5. Glycerol Sound

    Glycerol Sound TPF Noob!

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    Aw alright, too bad haha. Thanks for the feedback though guys :)
     

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