looks like a watch advertisement

[judehei]

shot with a pos flash, I'd rather have found some way of relecting in her eyes a bit, but I didn't manage it. A little dark, but I love the composition. any comments? (good/bad/ugly?)

 

[altered ego]

she's fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine thats all i have to say

 

[meotter]

yea, i wish the wind was blowing a little harder

otherwise, it's an interesting angle, and the model has good expression of confusion and possible innocence.

 

[Alison]

I like the angle. Like you mentioned, some fill flash would really help her eyes and face stand out more.

 

[MDowdey]

ok since this is the critique forum, ill be the jerk and blast this one,

1) she looks confused yes, possibly even dumb. kind of a vacant stare in her eyes.
2) the angle makes me tilt my head, and now my neck hurts.
3) i like the idea but i want more color and get her outta the middle of the frame.

just my .02

i think you are going in the right direction though!!

md

 

[Big Mike]

I kind of like the angle of the shot...it adds interest to the vertical lines of the building that would otherwise be a little boring.

I like the pose but I don't like that she is looking out of the frame in a disinterested sort of way. Her face is a bit dark...a reflector would have been useful here.

I like the wavy reflection in the window behind the model but it is stealing some attention away from the model.

 

[StvShoop]

it doesn't seem like an ad to me at all; it's much more realistic than that, journalistic even, (besides the angle)

the pristine marble-y stuff of the building seems to be in dischord with her outfit...

it's a very interesting shot, i can't recall anything else like it

 

[ZacKrohn]

I like this alot...I would perfer it if you zoomed a bit more on the model..either that or croped a bit around her theres to much background space.

 

[mentos_007]

I think that composition is quite original and if you like it it's ok, but i'd prefer it not soooo tilted. And I'd like to see a handsome guy insead of her

 

[molested_cow]

Yeah the watch stands out a lot.... That's probably because she's not looking at the camera, so the attention goes to the watch.

We need more wind though...