Louvre photo

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  1. Remi M.

    Remi M. TPF Noob!

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    While I was going through all of my photos from my big Euro trip. There were some photos that I wanted to delete but something about them kept me from doing so. So I set them aside until I knew more about photography to do something with them. This is one of those photos:
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    There are allot of things wrong with it. It's to dark obiously. Turning up the exposure blows out the window. The composition is wrong. It's symetrical and centered. The statue (Nike of Samothrace) is cutoff. But something about it kept me going back to it.
    Here is a try at working with it:
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    Please let me know what you think.
     
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    the shot after work is really nice, i would be very happy with that.
     
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    Thank you benaccent :)

    I made a couple of small changes to it again. Removed some of the noise and burned the left arch a bit to even it out.
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    LOVE IT!
     

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