Love

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by x-man, Mar 26, 2007.

  1. x-man

    x-man TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 23, 2007
    Messages:
    39
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Hong Kong
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    The following photo is my photo class homework. Title: Love

    Please give me some comment. Thank!

    [​IMG]
     
  2. The_Traveler

    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

    Joined:
    Dec 11, 2006
    Messages:
    18,105
    Likes Received:
    7,454
    Location:
    Mid-Atlantic US
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    IMO, the whitepoint needs to be reset using levels.
    the name and location are really distracting
     
  3. JenR

    JenR TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2006
    Messages:
    350
    Likes Received:
    11
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think the mother and child should be sharp. You are showing the mother's love for her child, right? It really bothers me that the swing and kid are so very OOF.

    ~jen
     
  4. x-man

    x-man TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 23, 2007
    Messages:
    39
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Hong Kong
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I modify lighting and add sharp. I think this is better

    [​IMG]
     
  5. x-man

    x-man TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 23, 2007
    Messages:
    39
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Hong Kong
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Hi JenR:

    You right! I only sharp on mother, because I want people look at the mother first!
     
  6. The_Traveler

    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

    Joined:
    Dec 11, 2006
    Messages:
    18,105
    Likes Received:
    7,454
    Location:
    Mid-Atlantic US
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I think that, to concentrate attention on mother, you should decrease the brightness of the links on the chain, they are very distracting.
     
  7. DeepSpring

    DeepSpring TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2006
    Messages:
    1,451
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Los Angeles
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I like the second version. I wish the kid was a tiny bit sharper tho
     
  8. x-man

    x-man TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 23, 2007
    Messages:
    39
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Hong Kong
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Hi DeepSpring:

    I hope so too. but that day is very cloudy, no much more light. my speed is 1/100. still not sharp on kid. too bad!:grumpy:
     
  9. JimmyJaceyMom

    JimmyJaceyMom TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 27, 2006
    Messages:
    1,768
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    PA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    well I like it.. I know when things are in motion its hard to get them into focus. But I do agree about the bright swing links.
     

Share This Page