Lunchtime Stroll

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by jmborkowski, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. jmborkowski

    jmborkowski TPF Noob!

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    A couple of B&W's from my lunchtime walk:

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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The first is quite nice. The second doesn't say anything to me.

    But in the first I feel I would have liked to see the top of the railing in the rear and a lot less of the one right in front. The play of very harsh light and the shadows is nice though, and very fitting a black&white photo! I think...
     
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    I agree on the second, I just threw it in since it was the only other BW from that shoot.

    WRT the first, I tried composing it a number of ways, including your suggestion and the one I posted was the one I liked best. I'll post the shot that's closer to what you mentioned, if I can find it.

    Thanks for the comments.
     
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    I do like the first and I noticed you mentioned the shot was composed using different angles, but did you include any low viewpoint shots? Maybe two feet off the ground? Just my 2₵.

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