Lynus Jun 3rd. Jarupa CA

[Bear]

Ok, I believe I've made some improvements compared to the older gig pics, a couple of which I have added for reference. Do you see substantial improvement? Any thoughts, suggestions, crits?

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#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

#6

#7

 

[Bear]

oops my mistake...it was july 3rd, a couple of days ago, not a month ago

 

[Bear]

no comments on the new pics?

 

[sayambhu]

great looking skin tones and body languages, but the only issue I find here are the faces - in every photograph except # 5, 6 and 7, you lost some face or the other.

from your older shots
1st is under exposed and contains distracting elements like flower pots and camera...

2nd : second guy's face is lost from the mike of the first, however, nice shadows of the hairs on the face.

from your new shots :

1st : face in the background lost by the metal plate
2nd : big sky (crop it down from above ?), face not correctly visible
3rd : too much sky... looking at the left hand side backgrounds, cant say its a *fine* composition
4th : face not visible...

however, your new shots are definitely many times better than the last ones. try capturing facial expressions - you're already doing great !

all the best !

 

[JIP]

I really like #6 I do remember your original set and this one is great.

 

[geminigrl24]

I really like # 6 and #7 . Good job