Lynus Jun 3rd. Jarupa CA

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Bear, Jul 5, 2007.

  1. Bear

    Bear TPF Noob!

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    Ok, I believe I've made some improvements compared to the older gig pics, a couple of which I have added for reference. Do you see substantial improvement? Any thoughts, suggestions, crits?

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  2. Bear

    Bear TPF Noob!

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    oops my mistake...it was july 3rd, a couple of days ago, not a month ago
     
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    no comments on the new pics?
     
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    great looking skin tones and body languages, but the only issue I find here are the faces - in every photograph except # 5, 6 and 7, you lost some face or the other.

    from your older shots
    1st is under exposed and contains distracting elements like flower pots and camera...

    2nd : second guy's face is lost from the mike of the first, however, nice shadows of the hairs on the face.

    from your new shots :

    1st : face in the background lost by the metal plate
    2nd : big sky (crop it down from above ?), face not correctly visible
    3rd : too much sky... looking at the left hand side backgrounds, cant say its a *fine* composition
    4th : face not visible...

    however, your new shots are definitely many times better than the last ones. try capturing facial expressions - you're already doing great !

    all the best :) !
     
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    JIP No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I really like #6 I do remember your original set and this one is great.
     
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    I really like # 6 and #7 . Good job ;)
     

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