macro cicada shell

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  1. WTF?

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    i took this picture of a cicada shell when i was out skating with a couple of my friends, they said it looks good but there something i dont like about it, what do you guys think?

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    Looks out of focus back left and the back ground is interfering, the blue section.
    thats just my opinion
     
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    The whole picture is a little long I would say, and the subject is too much to the left. The blur is fine but the blur shouldn't be on the subject. Which it is. But it is a cool picture.
     
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    focus seem to be at the front of the cicada....if the focus is a little bit back around the head...then you would see more of it....now the main subject is too blur i feel.
     

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