Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by AudioInjectedSoul, Apr 30, 2005.
Brutalise it guys!
Say what you think
Sorry if it's disallowed. But..
*hides in shame*
I like composition, the flowers are very pretty, but I think the image is a little flat. Maybe more contrast would help? Or if possible, reshoot it with slightly different lighting?
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I like it, but agree with it being a little flat. Also, only the flower furthest from the lens is in focus. The one nearest the camera is too near. You need to increase your dof I think. Certainly focus on the nearest flower as it is the main point of interest. That's just my view of course. This may have been what you were going for.
The petals look good soft, but the center of the flowers could use a bit of sharpening in my opinion.
yes nice colours and composition! but definately a focus issue here.
I would try and sharpen it up a bit personally. The composition should(imho) be focused on one flower or the other, but the colors are beautiful!!!
i think this might be a lighting issue now that i look at it. as someone else said, a reshoot with maybe a sunset or early sunrise would benefit this.
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