Macro - Pink Flower

[AudioInjectedSoul]

Brutalise it guys!

Say what you think

-Steve-

 

[AudioInjectedSoul]

Sorry if it's disallowed. But..

Bump.

*hides in shame*



-Steve-

 

[anton980]

I like composition, the flowers are very pretty, but I think the image is a little flat. Maybe more contrast would help? Or if possible, reshoot it with slightly different lighting?

 

[ferny]

My sister was located at the Harpenden hospital for a bit.

I like it, but agree with it being a little flat. Also, only the flower furthest from the lens is in focus. The one nearest the camera is too near. You need to increase your dof I think. Certainly focus on the nearest flower as it is the main point of interest. That's just my view of course. This may have been what you were going for.

 

[fotofun]

The petals look good soft, but the center of the flowers could use a bit of sharpening in my opinion.

 

[dalebe]

yes nice colours and composition! but definately a focus issue here.

 

[MDowdey]

I would try and sharpen it up a bit personally. The composition should(imho) be focused on one flower or the other, but the colors are beautiful!!!

i think this might be a lighting issue now that i look at it. as someone else said, a reshoot with maybe a sunset or early sunrise would benefit this.

great work!!!!


md