Maggie

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by dangerwoman, Aug 26, 2008.

  1. dangerwoman

    dangerwoman TPF Noob!

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    just getting into portraiture and such. :)
     
  2. iflynething

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    Seems alright but I think the lighting is a little bit too harsh. It is doing something to her face that makes it not look good. Makes her look pale

    ~Michael~
     
  3. tirediron

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    A good effort, and while you've not asked for comment/critique, I'll offer a couple of suggestions (in addition to agreeing with the above comment). Choose your backgrounds and surroundings carefully. While you've made good use of selective focus to produce a soft background, there's still enough detail in it to be distracting to some degree, especially the branches upper right. Additionally, this pose is rarely flattering to anyone; in fact, with the rare exception of a few very dramatically lit portraits, the only time one should see a full side profile, IMO, is if the picture says "Wanted" at the top.

    What I think was needed for this image, composition notwithstanding, was a diffuser over the light source from image left. That would have softened things up considerably, and produced a nicer skin tone. You've got a beautiful model there - take advantage of her!
     
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    Agree, I did a quick edit to show you hope you dont mind! Just used the recovery tool in Lightroom to recover the blown out areas.

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    thanks. tho i prefer to keep her skintone as it was in reality rather than giving her a "tan".
     

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