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Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by Delapsus-Angelus, Apr 7, 2008.

  1. Delapsus-Angelus

    Delapsus-Angelus TPF Noob!

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    Hi,

    My serious 1st/2nd picture and i really want to start as i mean to go on. I am looking for nice in-depth constructive comments, something i can use for my future pics, and hopefully my future. Thanks

    Please note this was not with any professional camera 7mgp only......I just bought a nice one, and will post more for all your comments and advice.

    I'm just looking for points that could have improved the pics......so i can take this on for future shots.....

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  2. deudeu

    deudeu TPF Noob!

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    I think that the biggest problem with the first one is composition. You croped it yet kept the character almost in the center but not exactly in the center. I would move it more to the side or dead in the center. Right now it's a bit strange. Polarizer could have helped too.
    On the second one i would crop off a bunch of the bottom. I's just black and doesn't bring anything to the picture.
    Overall two pretty good shots though.

    PS: This is just my opinion and i am far from being an expert.
     
  3. Delapsus-Angelus

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    Looking at the images i think you're spot on. I wish i could have go the 1st image technically better, but then i just looked and took the shot....... :(
     

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