Manchester C.C.

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  1. Garrentee

    Garrentee TPF Noob!

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    Now i know these are noisy...the reason being i left the ISO on 800 when i was shooting these! DAMN

    That out of the way, I was shooting these for the country club for some promo shots(included was a free round of golf...yay!)

    These are some of the better shots i got...how do they look(comp., exposure, and content)?...these are meant to be included in a vermont golf newsletter.
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    I know the noise sucks but i dont have any noise software...thanks
    garrentee
     
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    Vibrant colors!

    In the first one, there seems to be a random blue smudge in the sky towards the left of the middle of the sky right under the clouds.

    I think one and two are stronger compositionally(art wise) and also look more stereotypically *country club*, three looks like a shot of a park branching off into a forrest or woodsy area (and it might also be that the water is dark, I always imagined the country club lakes would be a nice deep blue, maybe green. But that is beyond your control of course :D.) The lawn mower lines in the second one really appeal to me, makes it look a bit trippy.

    But three is really gorgeous in it's own part due to the glass surface of the lake and those shore plants.
     
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    Holy Cow, I see that smudge on #1...kinda looks like a penis...wonder what thats from?

    I agree that #3 looks more parky then golf coursy(?)...that pond kinda looks frozen

    thanks ordinaryday!!
     
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    No problem!

    Haha! I thought the same thing about the smudge but wasn't sure if you'd be offended if I made the comment.
     
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    First one is tilted oddly... A nice set though, and number 3 gets a bit grainy in the back.
     
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    Here's my take....

    #1...try cropping down to the top of the predominant clouds. It will show more of the green and flag.

    #2...OK...Clone out the brown spot in the left foreground.

    #3...Try cropping up to the middle of the water on the right side of the shot. Too much water distraction.

    Nice colors...good luck with the presentation.

    OM"sO
     
  7. Garrentee

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    thanks laser and pna.

    laser i think that the only reason it looks tilted is because the flag is tilted...

    PNA, ill give those sugestions a try...in #2 thats not a brown spot its the 200 yard marker and ill def clone that out thanks for bringing it to my attention...thanks again

    anyone else?
    garrentee
     
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    LOL...I thought the same thing! Memories of Austin Powers 2 came to mind.
     
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    HAHA!! Thats so funny...forgot about that part!!!

    I think it might be a sunspot...but a good one!!
     
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    Garrentee, I didnt think about that lol
     
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    They look a bit like "windows" pc screensavers. H
     
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    i guess thats a compliment flash?...thanks...i think?
     

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