Marbles

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  1. LittleMan

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    ooOoOoo... pretty :)

    the only thing that i can think of that irks me (and i have no fix or suggestion) is the top left corner seems empty... no detail, no nothing... it's just barren... but the shadows, the texture on the floor, the light reflecting through the marbles is just brilliant!
     
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    anyone else?
    What are the good/bad points of this picture?
     
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    i like it. nice work.
     
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    Maybe a bit more depth of field? it seems to get too blurry too fast.
     
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    the spacing between the marbles looks off if im correct?
    maybe try an even spacing between them and see how the pic turns out
    just something i would try
    amazing pic tho!
    *im new too, cant wait till spring to try this out :)*
     
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    are you talking about the large gap after the second marble? If so, than that was intentional... The rest ARE spaced exactly the correct distance from each other.... I made sure of it.

    I tried a pic with more DOF and it didn't look as good as this one.
     
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    oh right on didnt know... happy shooting!
    p.s did you try even spacing between the marbles? im curious to know what it looks like
     
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    I left the marble missing because I was shooting it for the "Imperfection" contest. The reason the rest of them look closer together as they get farther away is because it's an optical illusion...
     
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    oh right , should have done my research lol sorry bout that
     
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    No problem! thanks for your input! :D
     
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    I would have cropped it slightly higher at bottom and slightly wider on left. One other thing the marble 4th from the end is kicked out slightly showing up a bit more in the shadow. How's that for nitpickn'
     

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