Mari.....: )

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Ok I'm gonna keep at it till I get it right!


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Thanks for lookin' and any comments or suggestions you may have! : )
 
You certainly are tenacious.

You're coming close with the lighting. There's a bit of the hair light spilling onto the forehead. And the shoulder should be in shadow... I'm not sure where that light is coming from.

The hair is a mess. Without some sort of diffusion, you're gonna have to spend more time with hair.

Like I say... you're on the right track!

Pete
 
You're right the hair was a mess......so first I ried something over her hair and then I also I did an updo to try to counter that as well.......Are these ones any better?



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Again, thanks for looking! : )

And thank you Pete for your valuable imput....It's helping me quite a bit! : )
 
neat shots PG! good comments pete, agree with what you're saying. That said these are really nicely posed shots.
keep at it! :D

just had to mention....Mari is my sister's name! the one in the snow thread :D neat
 

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