Mari.....: )

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  1. photo gal

    photo gal TPF Noob!

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    Ok I'm gonna keep at it till I get it right!


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    Thanks for lookin' and any comments or suggestions you may have! : )
     
  2. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    You certainly are tenacious.

    You're coming close with the lighting. There's a bit of the hair light spilling onto the forehead. And the shoulder should be in shadow... I'm not sure where that light is coming from.

    The hair is a mess. Without some sort of diffusion, you're gonna have to spend more time with hair.

    Like I say... you're on the right track!

    Pete
     
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    photo gal TPF Noob!

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    You're right the hair was a mess......so first I ried something over her hair and then I also I did an updo to try to counter that as well.......Are these ones any better?



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    Again, thanks for looking! : )

    And thank you Pete for your valuable imput....It's helping me quite a bit! : )
     
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    I really like the shot with the scarf - great idea as her hair was a little distracting.
     
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    M @ k o TPF Noob!

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    Wow! you really getting good at this. These are great gal !
     
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    Thanks for the input guys I really appreciate it......Trying very hard to get the hang of this portrait thing! : )
     
  7. JonK

    JonK I want MORE!!

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    neat shots PG! good comments pete, agree with what you're saying. That said these are really nicely posed shots.
    keep at it! :D

    just had to mention....Mari is my sister's name! the one in the snow thread :D neat
     
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    #3 is a sexy shot :mrgreen: I like it!
     

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