Marissa

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  1. subimatt

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    I did a modeling shoot last week, something different from the norm and I had an absolute blast. Here are some of my favorites.

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    Great job number 3 is may favorite!
     
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    Great looking model, well done.

    The first three look like they could use some catch lights to make her eyes sparkle. I'm not a fan of the OOF area in the foreground of #2.

    Lastly, I feel like these could all use a tighter crop. There is too much background and not enough model. Give it a try and see if you don't like it better that way.
     
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    Thanks Mike, The OOF was due to the falling leaves we threw in front of her, I kinda like the effect, but Im a bokeh addict. thanks for the advice, Ill play a bit with croppings later this week and see how I like it.
     
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    The poses and expressions are great. IMO number 2 could be a bit lighter and the entire series could have a warmer colour balance. Number 1 and 2 especially have a cold model in a warm environment look. My personal preference is to make the model neutral at the expense of the background, so in number 1 and 2 the background will go orange.
     
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    ilike good job.

    Was did you just use natural light?
     
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    Thanks guys, Yea only used natural light.
     
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    Gotta love natural light. I agree about the color as mentioned above. #2 could really use some Pop, but the expression is great. #3 is my fav for sure. I notice there is a little more dead space on the top in most of them though.
     
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    Very nice! I really like #2.
     
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    Thanks guys!
     
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    number 3 is my fav, very nice shot of a beautiful model. i agree that some catchlights would make her "sparkle" a little :)
     
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    thanks!
     

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