I am not at all confident in this photo, but I'll give it a shot (no pun intended). I was at an outdoor market and photographed this young lady, just as she laid her head on the scale to rest. The photo in color was fine, but I thought the tonality of this shot communicated the moment better. It doesn't seem like a compelling image, though. Advice? I went back and cropped a little off the top. As much as I want to love this shot, I don't. Maybe it just misses? I'd love some insights.