Maternity Picture

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  1. Sontizzle

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    this is my GF at 21 weeks.

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    C&C
     
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    I like the concept very much.
     
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    I love the black and white and I really like what you're trying to do with this!

    My only critiques are that it seems a little soft or out of focus, and that it might work better with a bit of cropping and/or a portrait orientation.
     
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    im going to give it a shot again once she gets farther along
     
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    A small suggestion if I may.
    Next images position yourselves on a slight angle and this will better show her developing shape.
    Well done.
     
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    Ooh! Very good feedback!

    Oh, and I also like the heart shape that your hands make. My wife found it a little cheesy, but I found it incredibly sweet. Was it intentional?
     
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    yes it was intentional. thanks for the feedback!
     

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