Meet my new model - Dee :)

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  1. DocFrankenstein

    DocFrankenstein Clinically Insane?

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    Do you feel anything while your look at the pictures? how does she appear to you? Any emotions? Anything I should change?

    I was trying to go for a simple classic look, with just a hint of glamour. (I know...)

    Thanks

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  2. SantosD50

    SantosD50 What!! There's a ranking system?

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    #1 is great, #2 great idea, but I don't think she was captured at the right moment. #3 is great, #4 the hair is too messy on her arm, #5 is good, but I would like to see more of her other eye. Not really liking #6 and #7 seems extremely photoshopped. Keep working with her, you'll get some nice pictures!
     
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    oh man, in the second she looks like mona lisa to me :eek:
    the pictures are good, but I would like to see a more feminine face...
    I don't know, maybe you didn't wanted a classical portret.
    I don't like that smile.... maybe if she looked more sad, or something more sexy (with the lips closed).
    the first one is the best
     
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    Is she somehow related to Da Vinci? :)

    Three and Five are my least favs among these.
    3 - silly expression. It does not go well with the overall theme here, which I feel is passion.
    5 - looks too staged.

    Other than that, beautiful work, my friend. I like that connection with the eyes. :thumbup:

    You should post often.
     
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    beautiful shots - i like them all particularly #1 & #3 ... but like the expression in the last one too xx
     
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    I agree.. my favorites out of these are 1 and 3....
     
  7. chroix

    chroix In Latin it's "spikius conius thingonius"

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    she doesn't look that into it.. which I think is making the photos not really stand out. exposures are pretty bad on a couple also.
     
  8. DocFrankenstein

    DocFrankenstein Clinically Insane?

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    Thanks for the comments everybody
    This I'd have to disagree with.

    Discounting the last one, where I got some spill on her hair... what's wrong with exposure exactly?
     
  9. EJBPhoto

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    I think that the first two are very nice. They are very flattering to your subject and nicely composed :)
     
  10. JonathanM

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    OK, portraits are not my thing, but 3 & 7 look too posed, like the kind of shots in some cheesy teenage girl magazine....

    I like 2, I think her expression in 1 is good, but her arms look uncomfortable.
     
  11. mentos_007

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    very nice pictures! thanks for sharing! i like the last one...
     

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