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  1. New England Moments

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    Ok lets go with this....

    How do you feel about the Fence in these two photos??

    First Shot taken Winter/ 2007", shows entire home and barn, Fence not as much a part of the scene in this one , composition wise..

    Second Shot , done a few days ago, Fence now plays a pretty good role in the composition...

    so lets hear it on the fence, and anything else you want to sharpen your Cri-Teeth on ...











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  2. PNA

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    Good rework......

    Actually the white in both appears blownout.....

    Nice comp in #2...
     
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    They both look good, and the fence doesn't bother me. Maybe if you could have raised the camera a little higher in the second shot so that the fence isn't in front of the house on the right. But if that's not possible, I understand.

    I do really like these though
     
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    love them both - lovely shots
     
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  6. New England Moments

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    PNA Hi How R ya,,, Ok, Thanks for Comments...

    oCyrus.... I thank You too!! Camera could have been raised..

    Leigh.... Thanks so much.. appreciate it!

    Hertz Van Rental..... Hi.... your comment ----> "" How do you want us to feel? ""

    Well I want you to feel good with it, lot of people have a thing about a fence in foregrounds... ??????????
     

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