Mentos and a model

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    ok, so this was my second photo session with a model. I didn't know where to post it: here on in the gallery... hope it's not a problem.

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    what do you think?

    EDIT: I forgot to add that now I'm in love with b&w portraits and high iso :):p
     
  2. elsaspet

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    I really like the natural lighting in the first one, and the slight tilt of the window panes make it look "arty" to me. I really like it.
    In the second one, I love the bokeh and the windswept hair, but I think it would have been even better if her head would have been tilted up to capture that nice light again. And more of the shoulder in the photo although I don't think that's a big deal. Pretty girl. You did well I think!
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I think this is "just right," posting here.

    Nice stuff. You achieved a nice lighting ratio, giving shape to the face. Just a few little things to look after... like the bra strap, especially in the first view, maybe do a bit of general retouching.

    Very nice!

    -Pete
     
  4. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice work Mentos, it looks like you are using light very well...you will be famous in no time.
     
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    WOW!!! hoooray!!! thank you:)

    And yes, I noticed a bra, I even tried to do something with it, I asked her to hide the stripes under the blouse but it was still visible. So I left it like this, looks more natural I think :)
     
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    Great pictures Mentos ....... Keep them coming ...... :)
     

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