Milan Transport - C&C

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  1. Canosonic

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    Thanks for viewing!C&C would be nice!
     
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    I like the last image.... The reflection of the sun I suppose with the aging of the train colors. Nice.
     
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    Thanks. Anything to improve? How is the subject/composition?
     
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    I suck at critiques but here goes...

    The first image possibly more DOF to cancel out the patrons. Have my eyes focus only on 1982.

    Not sure what you were going for. The linear effect maybe... The Bus and Bikes parallel is nice it's just the center portion of the background takes away from the foreground. I cut off some of the top of the image and I like it.

    The last one ... I do like. It's not flat which I love. The lighting is intense but it works with the image from my point of view.

    I'm no professional but that's what I think. Hope you don't mind. :)
     
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    Very cool series. I like the DOF in 1 and 2 and the composition of nr3. Nr3 seems a little bit tilted IMO.
     
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    Thanks, people!
     
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    This is my city!

    Your compositions are extremely original and creative, if your purpose was to surprise the audience and leave them thinking about your angles, mission accomplished!

    My favorite is the second, because it does best what I described above
     
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    Sorry guys, it ALWAYS FOOLS ME!!!

    The "Similar threads" panel is a deadly trap! I have already commented on several threads from long ago. Sorry for that.
     
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