Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by anua, Jun 22, 2004.
my friend, milena
wow. cool image. love the lighting- is there fine layer of white powder on her face, or is that effect due completely to the lighting?
one suggestion- crop out the lower border of the mirror in the bottom right corner...
neat shot, crop not withstanding.
I really like it.
The top sort of disappears, and the top of the mirror becomes the image frame. A black border or burning the top of the image would help keep this area, which I think helps the composition.
thanks for your thoughts, -
no, theres only a lighting at milena's face, she was taking the powder off at the moment -
heres a cropped version-
you're right - i haven't thought about it - at my monitor the black border appears automatically -
Very cool photo. Well done.
No critique here, just undiluted curiosity:
How does Milena like her photo?
the crop is definitely better. I find the white area at the top quite distracting though.
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