milena

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  1. anua

    anua TPF Noob!

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    my friend, milena

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  2. Osmer_Toby

    Osmer_Toby TPF Noob!

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    wow. cool image. love the lighting- is there fine layer of white powder on her face, or is that effect due completely to the lighting?

    one suggestion- crop out the lower border of the mirror in the bottom right corner...

    neat shot, crop not withstanding.
     
  3. ksmattfish

    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    I really like it.

    The top sort of disappears, and the top of the mirror becomes the image frame. A black border or burning the top of the image would help keep this area, which I think helps the composition.
     
  4. anua

    anua TPF Noob!

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    thanks for your thoughts, -:)

    no, theres only a lighting at milena's face, she was taking the powder off at the moment -;)

    heres a cropped version-



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    you're right - i haven't thought about it - at my monitor the black border appears automatically -;)

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    thanks again!
     
  5. jadin

    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    Very cool photo. Well done.
     
  6. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    No critique here, just undiluted curiosity:

    How does Milena like her photo?
     
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    the crop is definitely better. I find the white area at the top quite distracting though.
     

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