Mishney Shmoot

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  1. yanaji

    yanaji TPF Noob!

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    (copied from my tumblr) more about the shoot:
    a few blockmates and i had a photoshoot (yes, we can call it that because we had props, costumes, a reflector, styling and make up and stuff :D) last friday. although it was an overcast day, we still pushed through because, what the heck, our awesome can make up for it, we thought (not really, but i did). i can’t speak for everyone, but i sure had lots of fun. walking on damp, grassy land was something new for me. i hate getting my feet wet, but i wanted to get shots i’d be proud of. i definitely learned a lot. i can’t wait for the next shoot :D


    *about the editing: i couldn't make the album cohesive in terms of editing. the concept was all over the place, but i still love it. hehe. there's always a next time, yes? we're a bunch of amateurs, we already know that xD





    NOW ONWARD TO THE PHOTOS.
    (posted here are only my personal favorites. the rest of the shoot may be found on my LJ >> click! :3)


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    the ever sunny and bubbly Maika as (guess who? the apple is a dead giveaway lol) Snow White.


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    Jesi






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    Arlyh, a friend's friend.


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    Melli






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    thanks for viewing! :3
     
  2. Neil S.

    Neil S. TPF Noob!

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    I think that #1 & 2 have too much grass out of focus in the foreground. It is distracting in my opinion. The amount of grass out of focus in 4 is about perfect for that effect.

    3, 4 and 5 I like, 5 especially. Not sure what exactly its supposed to mean with the fruit, it looks cool though. Snow White?

    6 I like.

    7 and 8 are not bad, but I think they could have been cropped looser. There is stuff getting cut off.

    9 is OK.

    10 just looks like a common shot that anyone would take. Would have been nice to do something to make it special (I have no idea what lol).

    You may want to limit the number of pictures you post here. I would limit it to no more than 4-5 at a time. :mrgreen:
     
  3. PerfectlyFlawed

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    ^^^^ ++1.
     

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