Model Gwenny

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by dannyboyke, Dec 18, 2009.

  1. dannyboyke

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    Gwenny is living in the same town i am living.We do a lot of shoots every year.The shoots we do is always last minnute and mostly not planned weeks before but a few hours before the shoot,that,s the way we are working.:D
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    My only issue is with the model. Tell her I'd suggest side swept bangs instead of straight across ones, they'll make her look a little older. The photo suggests she's in her twenties, but the hair makes her look too young to be photographed so sexy. Does that make sense?

    Great picture though!
     
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    I like the lighting on this one.
     
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    I like it. your model is very pretty! Love her hair!
     
  5. Big Mike

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    Welcome to the forum.

    I like the model, hair & makeup etc.

    I think the pose could use a little work though. The first think I notice, is that here right eye is on the 'horizon' of her face and it's also partially covered by her nose. Having her turn just a bit more toward you, could have fixed those issues.

    Also, the turn of her body & neck aren't great. Her hair mostly covers it, but we can see where she's getting lines on her neck. That's something you usually want to avoid if you can. Also, from this angle, her shoulder is bigger & brighter than her face, which is another thing you usually want to avoid. The hair does hide it a little bit, but without the hair, it could be a problem.

    I hope you can show us more of the work you have done with her.
     

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