Model in black against black

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  1. jasonkt

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    NIce shot but her face seems a touch out of focus to me, and the reflection on her butt bugs me a bit.
     
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    its a tad to dark,
     
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    yeah its about 2 stops to dark :)

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    Thank you for the constructive criticism, I particularly think the comment about the reflection on her butt is helpful because I am always frustrated with my "eye" for details like that.
     
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    could do better on the picture
     
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    also i wish it wasn't so tight. her knee and toe are cut off.
     

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