Model Marie

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by baron, Oct 3, 2009.

  1. baron

    baron TPF Noob!

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    Share Marie's photo ; C&C welcome

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    Shes hawt
     
  3. Big Mike

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    Her hair is quite dark, you might try adding a hair light, or at least a reflector to get a bit more light up there.

    I'm not really a fan of all the dead/empty space in these shots. Sometimes that works, sometimes not. Maybe it would be better with a slightly more interesting background...like a nice gradient for example.

    I like the 2nd one best because we have a connection to the subject via eye contact and it's got some nice catchlights (although I'd like to see only one catchlight per eye). The first one just barely has a catchlight and her eyes are pointing too far away from the camera.

    Pretty girl though :)
     
  4. baron

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    Thank you very much for comments ;
    A few notes: "empty space" was specially made for these shots;
    I d'nt like eye contact so much and I love 1st foto :)
     
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    both are fine...tfs
     
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    #1 is awesome!!!
     

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