RMThompson
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Just presenting one photo so you guys can tear it up with your critiques:
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Not too bad, but I can see some issues.
I like the symmetry of the rings, but if you are going for that...make it as close to perfect as you can. It could be rotated a bit to the right and then cropped to put the rings right in the centre.
The color tones feel weird. I'm not sure if you were going for that or not. The left side has a red tint and the right side has a green/yellow tint.
I am guessing the T-shirts says, "With great moustach, comes great responsibility," right? The slogan is hard to read. I'm not really enjoying the split toning, but I do think the model is attractive, and the location is visually interesting with all those rings. I do think that having her look away from the camera gives the view what is called permission to look. I just wish we could see the T-shirt's slogan a bit more clearly. Nice choice of a dark-haired model with the dark moustach on the T-shirt.
Overall, the scene feels light,airy, and fun.
RMThompson, even though models and portraits are not my thing, your work inspires me, particularly because I shoot with a very similar kit. Are you an (the?) official shooter for Snorg?
Also, I just wanted to point this thread out. See? It can be done
Outstanding! The feel of this photo is on point and very sellable; if that is a word. I do not care about the symmetry or the text on the t shirt that I am buying. The shot conveys a mood. That mood has been bringing Snorg to a higher level since you have ben shooting for them.
I would start working on editorial and or commercial fashion work outside of Snorg.
Love & Bass