Model photo shoot.. 2nd time. LOTS OF PICS

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  1. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    As long as it is as good as the last one, I am happy. I dont want to be any worse :lmao:.

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    The first that really made me stop was #15, the colors are excellent. She is finally showing off her strong features, and the pose isn't the most amazing out there however I think it works well.

    I'd comment on the rest but there are just a few too many xD
     
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    9,10,11,13,17. My favorites. 10 and 11 in particular. very good job on them all. Gorgeous model.
     
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    I'd ditch that chair altogether or get your Granny on it, its totally out of place. Model is gorgeous but not too keen on the pole sticking up her backside in no.8. H
     
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    yup, 15 stands out
     
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    Got to agree to ditch the chair, The first thing I noticed in #1 was the bottom of the chair hanging down and that is a shame cause your model is very gorgeous. The rest I like and #15 does stand out.
     
  7. Robin Usagani

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    Thank you everyone.. Got any PP ideas on these? Which one works well in B&W?

    I took about 650 photos.. Going to give her about 75. Took me a while to post it here because I have to do it one by one (not like photobucket LOL)

    Would you belive me that she has 3 kids?

    If my Granny is still a live.. I would totally take her photos lol. I have mixed reviews about this chair. A lot of people love it.. a lot hate it.

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    I will clone out the torned bottom of the chair. I will fix the chair so I dont have to clone it out next time ;)
     
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    15 and 17 stand out to me.
     
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    6, 15, 16, and 17 are well put together shots.

    A lot of the others seem bland or are distracting.

    I will explain, and add some critique.

    1. The statue is very distracting and the chair and everything else just seem out of place.

    2. Good framing, but her expression sort of kills the shot. It doesn't seem to represent what you were going for in regards to the surroundings and pose, etc.

    3. It's all right. Her stare is sort of like durr durr durr looking and the pose isn't flattering. It looks as if she is squatting to go to the bathroom.

    4. The reflection is cool. Would have been nice to see it framed a little more to the right with her moved over a bit so the whole shot was a reflection shot.

    5. The angle just doesn't fit in with the rest of the set thus far.

    6. I like it. I think it is composed nicely and is very interesting.

    7. Not as good as number 6^

    8. Her facial expression kills it.

    9. Not much to say about this good or bad, it's just a bland shot.

    10. Nice pose, good framing, good shot. Would like to see it without the PP effect.

    11. Same as above ^

    12. Good shot, I just don't like her pose.

    13. Not a fan of the angle.

    14. The model looks very stiff, especially in the neck area.

    15. Good shot, nice contrast, good pose and attitude in this one.

    16. Favorite shot of the set. The balance and colors work very well.

    17. Cute and playful, good shot.

    Overall, you did a good job. There were a few angles that I wasn't big on, but overall you did your job. The model needs to work on her side of the camera a bit more though.

    Keep it up
     
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    I disagree with most here there nice, but not sure if the poses work as well as in #10 and 11 which are my favorite of them. I do believe they need a bit more light, perhaps a reflector would work. Just a bit to open up the shadows. Otherwise very nice job on the shoot. I really did like all of them.
     
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    Please please please edit out that bloody pony tail holder on her wrist. And in 15 can you fix the bottom scruff marks of the wall to match the top clean portion.

    13 and 15 are good, nice tone, good poses imo 16 could have been good if she was looking at the camera. 10's poses is good but shes looking off into the distance as well as looking up. Not a good look. If she could train her self to hold that pose and then just shift her eyes towards the camera. SHe does the eye lift thing in a tonne of the pictures and for such a gorgeous girl it makes her look like she's either stuck up or bored.
     
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    some great images there.. i personally love #5. nice job! gorgeous model as well
     

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