Model Photoshoot CC

[jjphotos]

Hi,
just tried my photoshoot with a friend and I rather liked this one.
Even though he's just looking at a wall...

Thoughts? Thanks.

 

[tirediron]

There's a lot to like about this image; the lighting and overall feel have a very 'fashion' quality to them, but there are two things that really bother me. (1) The little bit of green at the bottom right (grass?) seems out of place and I would make it go away; and (2) all the wrinkles in his shirt. A little refinement of his arm position and some arrangement of the shirt (with maybe some clips & gaff tape) would have made this a much stronger image.

 

[jjphotos]

There's a lot to like about this image; the lighting and overall feel have a very 'fashion' quality to them, but there are two things that really bother me. (1) The little bit of green at the bottom right (grass?) seems out of place and I would make it go away; and (2) all the wrinkles in his shirt. A little refinement of his arm position and some arrangement of the shirt (with maybe some clips & gaff tape) would have made this a much stronger image.

Thank you for the feedback!
I was thinking something similar after I was looking over it, but I didn't really know how to fix it.
Thanks for a solution haha

I'm also having trouble with arm (limb placement) placement when doing full body shots.
It either looks very awkward or just ok.
Any tips (or links to help)?

 

[tirediron]

I'm also having trouble with arm (limb placement) placement when doing full body shots.
It either looks very awkward or just ok.
Any tips (or links to help)?

With males, I tend to have them put their hands (well, just fingertips or thumbs really) in their pockets, or give them something hold/lean against. Women are easy since you can do almost anything with their hands, and as long as they're edge-on, it looks okay.

 

[Braineack]

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[astroNikon]

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I see it. As mentioned, figure out a way to fix that shirt. from the upper right shoulder to the left armpit it's just totally distracting.

 

[jjphotos]

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Can you see it now? Or perhaps see it through the screenshot astroNikon posted? Any feedback is appreciated!

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I see it. As mentioned, figure out a way to fix that shirt. from the upper right shoulder to the left armpit it's just totally distracting.
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Yep yep. I'll keep the lines/wrinkles in the shirt in mind next time I shoot. I can really see how it's distracting now. How are the other elements of the photo though? Thanks.

 

[Braineack]

I see it now, odd.