Model Pics! C&C please

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  1. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    Let me know what you think. As always critiques greatly appreciated!
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    Nice model, nice photos. I like the poses except the the last one. I do keep getting distracted by your logo though! Don't get me wrong, it's a nice logo, but it's too conspicuous. I like the colors/exposure in #5 though. I don't like the reflection of the water in #3. My favorite is #1, she looks more natural/relaxed there. At least there's no missing body parts. The lighting seems good in them all. Good job.
     
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    super shots! The hot spot on her leg in the last one is a bit distracting to me, and the missing fingertips in 3 is a bummer.
     
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    Great shots. Love #3 despite the missing finger tips. Great range between the first two and the last few on the dock. Nice work.
     
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    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    The point of my logo is so that people know who did the picture... I'm glad its obvious :) These pictures are for webuse... So I make it obvious on purpose
     
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    I think they're pretty good man. The last one looks like an ad shot for the JCPenny's catalog.

    Good stuff.

    More notable is your use of a Canon 1Ds Mark III. It's not in your sig line. Did you get a new body?
     
  7. shortpballer

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    Yea,
    I got a 1DS iii. I got over updating my signature every time I get something new. I change my equipment so often lol. Anyhow I thought about getting the 1D4 like you have. But realized I would rather just have full frame and don't need ISO performance since I almost ALWAYS shoot at iso 100. At most I will bump ISO up to 400.
     
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    Good stuff man!

    I love the use of rim lighting!
     
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    I know how it goes. I'm probably going to buy a 1Ds4 when they hit and ditch the 5D2. That, or I might wait for the 5D3. If it has more of the 7D features I may be happy with it... :) Who knows... it's a sick game, isn't it?
     
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    The woman is gorgeous. Great pictures.
     
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    If you find yourself 'ditching' the 5d3, let me know o_O
     
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    The first couple look a little overly posed, the last two are very nice, definite improvement
     

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