Model shoot, bokeh to the extreme...

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    Feedback welcome !

    Model: Loes

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    I like it:) specially eyes, they are sharp, almost crystal on blurry rest. For me good.
     
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    Love this shot, the tone, the pose, the eyes......
     
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    Nice shot, but it doesn't quite look like real bokeh.
     
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    Love this everything about it.
     
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    awesome shot:thumbup::thumbup:
     
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    It actually is all natural, no blur has been added.

    I'd like a photoshop expert to help me do a better job cleaning under the eyes though.
     
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    Love it, great model:thumbup:
     
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    I'll be the first to admit that I don't know a thing about portrait photography, but I know what I like, and I do like this. Stunning!

    Mac,
     
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    Great shot! Nice job on the selective focus but there's no bokeh.
     
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    I like this picture very much. You did a great job, really. The model is very beautiful and has amazing eyes, I also love the way her hair waves around. In my opinion, this such a great picture also looks good in black and white.
    However, the model's skin distracts me a bit, especially the area under the eyes. I think you should work on retouching these parts of her face, because they look a bit lighted up and the face looks somehow puffy.
     
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    The term 'bokeh' refers to the appearance/quality of out-of-focus areas in an image. In this picture, I think there is no bokeh to speak of. The out-of-focus areas are just blurred with no real quality to them. Nice shot nonetheless and nice use of shallow DOF.
     

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