Model Shoot C&C please...

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  1. jt69

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    Here is one concept of the entire session. I actually lit up to soften the background and make more contrast with the black. This was her second photo shoot.

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    i really like the shot, background is nice, good model

    but overall its overexposed a bit too much for my taste.
     
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    Way overexposed, she is too pink/orange, and there are some gnarly shadows on her arm and chin.
     
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    Way over exposed for my taste, skin tones seem off...but I like the pic, good shot!
     
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    Clone out the tattoo?
     
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    Amateurish at best for both parties. I am positive you can do better than this. The highlights are way to hot and the model is rather uninteresting. If anything she looks angry that you caught her doing her famous one legged stance while touching her head.
     

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