Model Shoot in Barn

[max3k]

Would like to hear some feedback on these shots.

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[ababysean]

hum, I think that for the one girl on the left, looking down is not her strongest angle. She has a bit of a double chin from that angle. I bet she is much more flattering when her face is slightly pointed up, or looking up, elongating the neck.

 

[usayit]

^^ and the location doesn't seem to fit the seriousness in their expressions. In #2, the hand placement of the sitting girl's right hand looks odd to me.. it looks like it is just hanging their.

 

[LaFoto]

It's funny: the girl with the longest hair seems not to be looking at the camera, but slightly to the side in the first, and her eyes look so big and sort of staring in the second. Very strange.

 

[Corvphotography]

yea, what they said. reminds me of children of the corn.

 

[Idahophoto]

I agree also the photo's seem dark to me, needs more light. Plus I think it would help if the girls where doing something working the hey feeding animals so something just posing like that does remind me of children of the corn like they said lol.