Model Shoot in the Mall

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  1. camz

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    I know 6 is typically too much to post so C&C not required. Just wanted to share this with you guys/gals.


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    they look great! In 3 she looks a little tired. They look perfect for a clothing store ad. great job!
     
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    Yeah I agree with her looking like she was caught in the middle of a transition. It was actually her first time so there was alot of direction needed but we are extremely proud of her. I think she's a natural. On #3 I wish I had it zoomed in a more because she has these tantilizing eyes and I think that shot would've worked better if it was more like a head shot.

    Thanks for the comments.:thumbup:
     
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    I think that massive side border is really distracting. It seems to take away from the picture IMO (sorry). I love #6, it does a great job of showing off her figure!
     
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    Great shots.

    I think she did great for her first time modeling, but I'm also not crazy about the pose in #6, to me it looks like she's about to pop a squat.
     
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    Good job. The first two look like they belong on a sign in the mall.
     
  7. camz

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    Thanks for the comments BIG. Took out the side borders.

    Yeah she was awesome for the first time *jaw-dropping*. I think she just has to hit her moves harder and with more umph and she'll definetly go places. Thanks for the comments!


    At times it's the model the brings the shoot to life and we were glad to be working with her. Thanks for the comments!
     
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    I like #3 looks real. #5 reminds me of the type o pics u find in a sears catalogue.
     
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    The last one is a really strong photo.
     
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    I like the coat, where can I buy it? Nice job
     
  11. camz

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    Thanks for the comments guys!

    LOL..if you don't mind it's from last year's line. :D
    Thanks!
     
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    Excellent work! Let's hear more about the shoot. Did you have free reign of the mall? Did you go through the proper channels or was the gorilla style.

    Love & Bass
     

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