Model shoot : kelly helmer, C&C welcome Please

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  1. TH.photo

    TH.photo TPF Noob!

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    well, your background is kinda strange. The lighting on 2 is a bad choice. But, your close-ups are pretty good. On her and your other post, Jenny.
     
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    Your lighting setups could benefit from some refinement. Poses 1 and 2 have highlights that are pretty blown out. A bit of fill light would really help those two shots.
     
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    #3 Is stunning.
    Light on #2 & #4 not to my taste
    #5 I want to see her stunning eyes
    #1 Nice body shape but head looks slightly awkward & background a little too cluttered
     
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    #5 is good, if the eyes were wide open it would have been GREAT
     
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    I dont like the angle of her neck and face in #1. Looks a little awkward.

    I agree with the comment to use more fill as well.

    Thanks,
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    TH.photo TPF Noob!

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    thank you for all the C&C
     
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    Of all of these... Nr. 2 is actually the one who really stands out!

    It has intense lighting which makes really gritty. Almost like a gritty 35mm print.
    I really like it!

    But, I'm not sure if it was that intentional...?


    The other ones are either too flat or too much backlight
     

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