Model Shoot

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  1. OffTheWall

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    Thought i would ask for a little CC from ya guys and what you guys would have done a little different :)

    Here is my first shot.
    Great model to work with btw lol amazing girl
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    And a little more of a macabre shot :) i just killed someone
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    More of these two are at modelmayhem.com/offthewallphotography :)

    Any CC would be great.

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  2. PerfectlyFlawed

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    First shots pretty cool... beautiful model. love the smoke . Dont care much for the "myspace pose"
    second shots wicked...love it... just wish her face didnt look so.. superficial... and the blood splatters , obviously Photoshopped.. but i would have made the opacity to the splatter (brushes?) a little darker, imo.

    lets see some more :)
     
  3. Oldschool92'

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    cool shots,one question though. have you checked to see if Vans trademarked the "Off the Wall" title or not?
     
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    scarey! wish her face expression in no2 was different.
     
  5. OffTheWall

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    Off The Wall is trademarked but OffTheWall Photography is not :) no spaces and such. If they do come back at me and rip me a new one then i would have to change all my watermarks to crooked mind photography lol.
     
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    Agree with the myspace pose lol. but here are some more

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    LOL this one made no sense im still unsure if i like it or not
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  7. lunaaa

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    Those ones are even better,the background,the makeup and the outfit she is wearing really works for the photos,nice job.
     
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    pretty cool definately fits your signature...
     
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    Loving the second batch of photos. The outfits, pose, the framing.....much better!!!
     
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    thank thank you :), i'll have some more up soon, real scary stuff lol i have a pretty demented mind haha the next shoot is going to involve a teddy bear and gasoline lol.
     

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