model shot C&C please!

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  1. amber.martin

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    I asked last night about lighting techniques on photographing people of color, my model today was AMAZING! because i didnt have a grey board, i winged it and just did a bunch of test shots. here is one pp. the floor is open! :)

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    I dig the shot in general but I really wish that you traded some of the dead space above her for some more of her, including her cut-off hands. I like the processing, whatever you did.
     
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    Let's see the series.
     
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    k, ill post them up, some are editted some not so here goes nothing! let me just upload to photobucket first
     
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    The framing choices on the sample posted first are very unusual....horizontal framing for some reason, and then to compound that problem you allotted excessive top space, cut-off hands...
     
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    ok heres the rest..

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    #1, #5 and #6 in that set are all great. #4 is very unflattering, I would trash that one personally.
     
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    I really like the PP you were going for on your first post with the outfit she was wearing. It looked very 60s. I think you should keep PP like that.
     
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    #6 is great
     
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    like #6
     
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    1. I would've gone with vertical framing and focused more on her than the background.
    2. Its nice, maybe a capture of her more in the frame.
    3. I like this, its simple. Her eyes are great.
    4. Im not digging the look, expression she has.
    5. I like this shot.
    6. Very nice and relaxed, you captured a moment. Very nice.
    I think for the most part the pp works.
     
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    I think the first one is the best
     

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