Modeling Session with Lauren

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    1,3,and 6 are stunning!
     
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    Loving 1 and the pose (but not light) in 5.
     
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    #1 is pretty good but the touch-up looks a little uneven. Needs more work on her right cheek and definitely more work on her lips. It also needs less smoothing or more texture on the nose and left cheek.

    #2 is very nice but you have to bring out the detail in her hair, and you need to check the highlight on the nose. A definite keeper with a little more work in post. Next time put more emphasis on the hairlight.

    #3 is a definite no. Her face isn't evocative of anything, the pose is boring, the vignetting is too chunky, and the hairlight is too strong.

    #4 could have been perfect. Bring out more detail in the hair and it's a definite keeper.

    #5 is a definite no. Highlights are unmanageably out of control.

    #6 is pretty good but I've seen the shot a million times before and the colors should be a little more muted in keeping with the general style.

    #7 is a no. Hair light is too strong, she has no neck, her face looks too round, the highlight on her foot is distracting.
     
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    I agree for the most part with ^^

    1 and 4 are faves, and 5 is the throwaway.
     
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    I notice in number 4 that there is a hughe different in color in different of her arm that isn't present in any other pictures.
     

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