Mom and 2 girls at Botanical gardens (11 shots)

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  1. Feetjie

    Feetjie TPF Noob!

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    Comments and advice and ideas welcome!
    (Please don't mind the watermark, it's for proofing/displaying purposes only, and not printed that way.)

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    TFL and looking forward to your comments!
     
  2. Lacey Anne

    Lacey Anne TPF Noob!

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    It's hard to look at the first few because the watermark hits the girl right between the eyes. hehe. I'm laughing at myself, not you, don't worry.
    I love the one of the baby with the blocks. Too cute! The white's seem a bit overexposed though. Nice photos! I can't wait for our weather to improve so I can do some outdoor sessions!
     
  3. Feetjie

    Feetjie TPF Noob!

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    Thanks Lacey!

    Some advice please:
    I am not sure if I should remove the leave in front ofthebaby or not. Somehow I think it adds a certain "oomph" to the photo, but maybe it will look better removed? (Nrs 5 & 6.)
     
  4. twocolor

    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    leave the leaf, I think it adds alot to the photo. Very beautiful shots!
     
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    Feetjie TPF Noob!

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    Thank you Two Color.
     
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    9 is priceless :)
     
  7. Feetjie

    Feetjie TPF Noob!

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    Thanks, I also love 9!
     
  8. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Sorry, but the watermarks are too distracting. Some potentially cute photos but are ruined by the watermark.
     
  9. bellacat

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    yeah that. I know you are just trying to protect your photos but this is a bit much and its hard to see the photo. Sorry
     
  10. KristinaS

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    --These are cute, but I think your focus is off in a lot of them. You want to make sure the sharpest part of the pic is the subject's eyes. In 1, (2), 3 & (4), I think the focus fell on the bear (I can't be too sure because of the giant watermark). In 5 & (6), it looks like the focus is on the leaf.
    --I'm not a huge fan of selective coloring, but that's a personal taste thing.
    --I don't like that the only thing you see in #10 is the back of the head.
    --The look like they are slipping off the frame in #11. It looks like you might have been on a hill, but it might look better if you straighten it out some. Also, watch chopping off limbs. I think this one looks a tad blown, too, but it might be my monitor.
     
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    Thank you Kristina... Now that's the kind off advice a girl can actually use :)
     

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