more backyard candids

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by JenR, Jun 19, 2007.

  1. JenR

    JenR TPF Noob!

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    My kids want absolutely nothing to do with photos and generally run in the opposite direction. For once, they stayed put! I would really love some feedback on these. PLEASE, PLEASE do not hold back because they are my kids. I want to improve and these are the most convient guinea pigs! :D

    I've got my big girl pants on, so tell it like it is (please!).

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    THANKS!!
     
  2. dostagamom

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    Those are great...I really like #4. The expression is priceless!
     
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    I like 3 and 4 the best.

    Number 1 is very nice too. Looks like she is very comfortable in front of the camera.

    Number 2 looks just a bit soft or Out of focus to me.

    Good Job.
     
  4. NJMAN

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    These are generally really good! The color, contrast, and focus is great on almost all of them.

    However,

    #1 looks like it needs shallow depth of field. Aside from that, its wonderful.

    #2 the skin color is a little too yellowish orange. Its also out of focus, and chicken wire fence is distracting in front.

    #3 and 4 are excellent. DOF is good, and color, contrast, and exposure are right on.

    BTW, #1 and #4 qualify as outdoor portraits IMO. I would be proud of all of them. Well done!

    NJ
     
  5. JenR

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    Thank you all for your comments! I really appreciate it!
     
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    3 & 4 are excellent, specially 4...
     
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    Love em all!!! Greaaaaaaat colors
     

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