more from the weekends shoot

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  1. newrmdmike

    newrmdmike TPF Noob!

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    here are a few more from last weekends jobs, will post more from the children later. feel free to critique even if its harsh. all i ask is that you dont edit my stuff.

    what do you think?

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    Sw1tchFX TPF Noob!

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    I think these are great portraits that would make anyone happy.

    #6 is my favorite beucase it's so dynamic IMO, #2 has great lines in it that point the viewer to the subject, 1 and 7 have a good soft focus effect (I think, image compression is confusing at times) and the others are ok.

    I don't like the one with the mirror, it does nothing for me.
     
  3. newrmdmike

    newrmdmike TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the reply, what is imo? and what are you talking about with "(i think, image compression is confusing at times)"?

    today is my first day to post, so im new to the slang
     
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    hey mike! glad you finally gave in and posted here :)

    IMO means In My Opinion...
    As far as the image compression goes...switch probably means that since the file was resized, he can't really give an honest critique on the soft focus effect on such a small photo, especially since jpeg compression can tend to do funny things with websized images (i didnt notice any of that in yours).

    anyway, the photos are real nice! number 7 is my favorite, although you might want to bring up the vignetting a tiny bit around her head. i like number 2 too (tootoo? :D), it's very 'hip'. haha.


    edit: came back and noticed i messed up. number 6 is my favorite :)

    sorry for the confusion
     
  5. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think these should go into the gallery that is there for them: Portraits!
    So I moved them. OK?
     
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    newrmdmike TPF Noob!

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    sure thing, i put them in general to see if they got more comments . . .
     
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    here are my critiques:
    #1: what does that out-of-focus light grey object is?????

    #3: the face is out of focus, sorry... you cropped a foot, too (#3 is the worst of the set, IMHO)

    #7: you cropped the hand...

    although these things, nice set :D
     
  8. newrmdmike

    newrmdmike TPF Noob!

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    in #3 the face is in focus, not so sharp on the resize, and on num 7 yes i did crop it, with the hand i just wanted it to be a tight shot
    and felt it would have had to much negative space, but thanks for the comments, on 3 i just missed on the foot, framed the head where i thought it should be . . . whoops
     
  9. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    #6 is my favorite, great composition and tones. The last one doesn't do it for me though...not a flattering angle for her.

    Your name is Michael Hudson? I get called that quite often...although my name is Michael Hodson. I even went to school with a fellow named Michael Hodgson. Funny :scratch:
     
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    newrmdmike TPF Noob!

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    there are so many photographers with m.h. for initials, in fact www.michaelhudsonphotography.com is not me . .. but nice. and mary henry of houston, mhphotogrpahy, and you . . . so many m.h.'s
     
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    #2 is my favourite and I also like #5 and #6. Nicely done!
     
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    3rd is my fave~
     

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