More portrait practise

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by tempra, Oct 27, 2007.

  1. tempra

    tempra TPF Noob!

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    Trying some low key tonight with my nephews - comments/suggestions more than welcome.

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    I like the first 2 but the last one it a bit off, I think the skin tones are too far apart to work together in low key. But great job!
    love to see the low key shots.
     
  3. Christie Photo

    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I feel all of these would benifit from a subtle background light or a skim light to afford a bit of separation from the background. More what's more important, the clothing is out of key.

    You're not far off. I like how close you have the two of them posed.

    -Pete
     

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