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  1. buckenmeyer

    buckenmeyer TPF Noob!

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    Does the second photo work? Or is it too simple? Thanks for your responses on the other photos.. let me know if you get tired of me uploading photos!
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  2. Canon Fan

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    I like the first one but the second looks like a victim of camera shake?
     
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    the first one is ok. while the second one is blurred. I don't know why. there's nothing sharp. Oh sorry... her right arm is sharp - not her face. It doesn't look well for me
     
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    Yep. I love the 1st but the second seems out of focus - ever so slightly.
     
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    1. maybe turning face a little to create more shadow. ps a little to make the color of the face more real?
    2. with portaits, one common uncomfortness is that some body parts come out of nowhere. Her right arm looks like another person's. Maybe having some shadow on the face will help deliver more sensational information.
     
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    thanks for your comments. :D
     
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    #1 is very nice!
     

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