More seniors (5 pics)

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  1. JubbaKing

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    More on the way...

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    Looks good, but the black spot on the last one doesn't look right.
     
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    Good Stuff!
     
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    I agree with sw1tch, the black doesnt look right, and her shirt is also really dark. but other than that they look good. i really like 3, the lighting, and everything looks nice. good job.
     
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    Thanks everybody. The last one is too contrasty right now so I'll fix that soon later tonight. I think the black spot once it has more detail in it will be more affective as a foreground element when I put more detail back into it.
     
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    I really like the 4th one, nice work
     
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    Inspiring. Great work!!
     
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    I think #4 is a great shot. Sometimes it's hard to make the fellas look REALLY good. I'm sure he'll love it.

    In the last one I agree about the dark area, but what I noticed more is her face. I wonder how she'd look if her chin was brought down a bit more so her eyes would be forced to open more. Just a thought. The rest of the pose looks great. I like the composition of the first one a lot....with the columns leading up to her.
     
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    The last one I would crop as a vertical portrait, and also brighten it up more like you did for the first one. Otherwise, very nice work. :D
     
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    I don't have much room to say anythng as I don't know what I am talking about but in #2, her hands look out of place. I guess it is how they are positioned and the difference in color of her hands and face. Other than that I think they look good.
     

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