More Views from a Bridge

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  1. craig

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    Judging from the response of "A View from a Bridge"... I felt that these did not make the cut. They seem to be lacking in the drama dept. I enjoy the elements; to me they are not quite together.

    Shot from Wilson Bridge (moments before my earlier post). Snake River. Feb 26 2005 nearing 7am. Cold and no tripod! 16 is from the east side and 28 is from the west side of the bridge.


    16 ƒ5.6 @ 1/80 18mm daylight WB
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    28 ƒ7.1 @ 1/8o 48mm daylight WB
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    Oooh, I reeeally like the second one! I would mess with contrast a wee bit more though, and perhaps incorporate a little more blue into the picture? If you're into edited, that is... if not, then it's a great shot!
     
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    The reflection of the sky on the water surface in the second view creates a whole different scene... verging on surreal. I'd like to see this as a large print.

    Good stuff!

    -Pete Christie
     
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    #2 is a really nice shot!! I like it a lot!
     
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    Muchos gracias! Landscapes are tough for me. Of course they are always better in your mind's eye.
     
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    yeah, number 2 is astounding
     

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