Morning Mist

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  1. 92sir

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    For me, both the vignette and the toning are overpowering the image.
    The image is simple and nicely composed with the strong lead-in.
    Sometimes less is better.
     
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    I really appreciate the critique. I have to agree the more I looked at it the more I really didnt like it. I have uploaded a different version hopefully this one is better. Thanks again for the comments.
     
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    I'll be honest, I think that if you wanted to take this image to print(and I believe it is indeed print worthy) you may want to go without any vignette at all. If you still like the idea of the vignette, then I think larger than your second version, but, less in strength. Hope this makes sense.
     
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    Thanks for the input it really is appreciated. I agree with the vignette. I was actually iffy when I re did it. I wasnt to sure if I liked it but I figured I would see what you thought:) Thanks again SympL:thumbup:
     

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