" Mosey Morning "

Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by New England Moments, Nov 15, 2007.

  1. New England Moments

    New England Moments TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 13, 2007
    Messages:
    453
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Vermont
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Good / Bad / Indifferent ...........Thoughts?


    [​IMG]
     
  2. Artograph

    Artograph TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 16, 2007
    Messages:
    1,343
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    I am Canadian, eh.
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Mmmmmmm.......nice!! Makes me want to be right there!

    ;O)
     
  3. lordson

    lordson TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Oct 16, 2007
    Messages:
    124
    Likes Received:
    0
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    its is foggy or is the DOF not that big
     
  4. Steph

    Steph No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Oct 18, 2006
    Messages:
    1,314
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Steventon, Oxfordshire, UK
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I really like the composition: there's something to look at from foreground to background (the flowers, then the horses, then the trees and finally the hills in the fog). I also like the square crop. The only things I don't like are the flowers that are cut on both sides of the frame and the border (but I guess that is just a matter of taste).
     
  5. midnitejam

    midnitejam TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2004
    Messages:
    314
    Likes Received:
    3
    Location:
    Ohio
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Excellent capture! Everything is going for it. The fog and DOF reeks with mood. The detail where detail is needed helps to enhance the sense of depth.

    Cheers
     
  6. Chris of Arabia

    Chris of Arabia Herding cats since 1988... Supporting Member

    Joined:
    Mar 10, 2007
    Messages:
    7,825
    Likes Received:
    16
    Location:
    The Magic Kingdom
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think I like this in parts - as in there's a front part and a back part - I'm just not convinced about the two together. If I was going to pick, I'd say the bit beyond the fence has more going for it, with the horses acting as the foreground interest.
     
  7. Trenton Romulox

    Trenton Romulox TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 10, 2007
    Messages:
    2,392
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Maine
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I was loving this shot until you just brought that up...the shot would be better with no fence and the horses as the foreground.

    I still like the shot though, don't get me wrong. But Chris has some good thoughts.
     
  8. a5i736

    a5i736 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Mar 9, 2007
    Messages:
    298
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Traverse City MI
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Less DOF is not going to make it look foggy! Just to let you know so when you try to make fog with your lens yo know it wont work lol :)
     
  9. Lisa B

    Lisa B TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 13, 2007
    Messages:
    828
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Mount Penn, PA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I like this picture, but I couldn't decide where to focus my interest while looking at it. I think there is too much foreground - as I scrolled the picture back up I realised that (as a coupld of other people have pointed out) the picture, as good as it is already, would benefit greatly by cutting out half the flowers - just up to the fence, so that there is a little bright colour from the couple of flowers that you would then still be able to see but the main focus is drawn to the horses and the detail behind them. With so much flower in the foreground as it is, im drawn there and miss most of the other stuff - which is actually really good!

    Nice shot.
     

Share This Page