Mother & Daughter - Cuban faces

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  1. photelle

    photelle TPF Noob!

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    I got back today from my 6th trip to Cuba. Grabbed these of my friends there on the back porch area yesterday afternoon - cc please! Simple editing done on the plane, laptop colour and contrast is off so opinions are appreciated. Thanks in advance!

    f/2.8, 1/125, ISO 200

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    f/3.5, 1/160, ISO 400
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    f/3.5, 1/160, ISO 400
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    f/3.5, 1/400, ISO 400
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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    1. Really nice capture, if possible go about 1/3 - 1/2 stop darker on the face of the girl on frame left and if possible just a little more of the hair for the girl on the right.
    2. Wonderful!
    3. Again, just a tad darker on the younger girl's face.
    4. Nice.
    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.
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  3. dylj

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    Completely agree with tirediron on the first photo. This would be my favorite if the girl's face were a little darker. The expression in #3 is priceless. I think B+W works really well with this couple.
     
  4. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Seems like f2.8 was a bit too widely open so the girl's face slipped out of your focal plane and her eyes are not quite as sharp as they should have been - in addition to the fact that her face is too bright and looks featureless now. A pity. They are two lovely models, and I like the interaction in 3, only is the girl's face too bright once again.

    2 is perfect. Do you plan to convert that one into black and white, too? Makes me curious to see converted, as well.
     

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