Motor City from Canada

kdhutch55

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Not bad, though I will agree about the wires ... and the foreground trees.

Isn't there a spot on the riverside, north of the train, that has some rusty barges and rotten dock ... though its been many years since I was in Windsor.

You got any with the bridge?
 
Eyes are drawn to too many things at once. The train, the trees, the buildings, the wires. There's too much in the shot and not a clear enough composition to let me know what I should be looking at.

I disagree with your processing choices as well... oversharpened by the looks of it. Too much work on the contrast/colors.

That said, those are more subjective than my previous subjective remarks.

That said, I'm always right, so you can pretty much throw subjective out the window. :)
 
The wire is definitely a problem. Could get a better view of Detroit from the path that you can see in the middle distance. I would agree that trying to fit the train engine in, is making it all too busy.
 

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