Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by M3l0diks0ul, Apr 15, 2005.
if the keys were in focus it would look great
ilike the position of the keys in the first one it just needs to be in focus can you reshoot it
try shooting at the same angle as the first one but focus on the keys
what are you shooting with
an HP M407 HP Photosmart
3x optical zoom
Ok i tried to take some more. see what u like.
Increase you DOF a lot more and focus on the keys. I think that would do it. Hope that helps.
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