My 1st Photo posted for critique

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  1. Clikon

    Clikon TPF Noob!

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    This is my first photo I've posted for critique. Did a little post-processing...anyway, other than being a little less than sharp (i don't know the word for that, "blurry"?)....i thought it was intriguing. in fact, i've probably not seen a better picture in my entire life. :mrgreen: hope I have it sized right.


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    What is the main focus of this photo?
     
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    First focus is the man and his dog on the bridge (for me), and adding to this is a second focus, i.e. the rain on the river, showing us that the man walks his dog in the rain. Not too shabby a scene, so I think.

    But since you are show-casing your first photo, I'm moving this thread to the General Gallery, that's the place for the photos. The Beginners' Place is more like a Q&A-forum, you see?
     
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    The main focus originally was the bridge, but since it focused on the branches midway between me and the bridge, I felt it turned out to be a little better. I think the man and the dog look better softer. However, nothing's really in focus is it? I know.....let me post something else. :er:
     
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    OK, LaFoto. I've noted that. Thank you.
     
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    cool pic still. looks like a place where I'm originally form in PA.
     

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